I didn’t want the obvious problems to be presented, like someone catches Will and he goes to jail, but just a little something. Yes, there was tension between Chloe and Will, but sometimes I felt like the story was falling flat. A lot of drama could have been created just from the teacher/student story line. I thought Chloe being 17 years old wasn’t necessary for the story. Why does Chloe have to be 17? Why couldn’t it just be an 18 year old student having a relationship with a teacher? I tried to get over the fact, what Will and Chloe were doing was very illegal. If Chloe could just shut-up sometimes, I was so sick and tired of hearing what was going on in her head, she just wouldn’t stop. At times, I was just skimming paragraphs, because Rae would just repeat something I already knew.
As many reviewers have complained, there were a lot of fillers. My main and obvious problem is how long and drawn out the story was. I had a lot of issues with When Summer Ends and I agree with a lot of the reviewer’s rants, so let’s just get started. When Summer Ends has the overall same story line to Slammed, but not as good as Slammed. I wish I didn’t know Will was a teacher, but I wouldn’t have picked up When Summer Ends if I didn’t, so I’ll rephrase, I wish we found out Will was a teacher way in the beginning. However, everything comes crashing to a stop on Chloe’s first day at school, when she sees Will and he’s not a student. They hit it off immediately and form a relationship. Chloe sneaks into a 21 years old and up bar and meets Will, the bartender. It’s the summer before Chloe’s last year in High School.
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